tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post4874977334416798978..comments2023-09-19T06:23:16.086-07:00Comments on Cary Caffrey: Science-Fiction Fantasy Saturday: FugitiveCary Caffreyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-32032313142778892012013-01-30T08:40:10.448-08:002013-01-30T08:40:10.448-08:00Oh no! You hated my snippet! *holds head in hands,...Oh no! You hated my snippet! *holds head in hands, sobs* Oh, wait, or did you mean...Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-15451347470148848992013-01-30T08:07:25.015-08:002013-01-30T08:07:25.015-08:00Holy Crap on a Cracker! That is so very not good.
...Holy Crap on a Cracker! That is so very not good.<br /><br />Cali Cassels Hickshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13801436815373396482noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-25210639498983140462013-01-30T01:42:50.351-08:002013-01-30T01:42:50.351-08:00Uh-oh...!
I think this data is going to be used f...Uh-oh...!<br /><br />I think this data is going to be used for nefarious deeds!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07039391701819796271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-80495935771329490642013-01-29T19:33:03.138-08:002013-01-29T19:33:03.138-08:00Uh oh. Sounds like trouble. But it also sounds lik...Uh oh. Sounds like trouble. But it also sounds like exactly the place for trouble.<br /><br />Loved all the sensory details.<br /><br />(and sorry for taking so long to comment)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-7020561443820351612013-01-26T12:49:47.750-08:002013-01-26T12:49:47.750-08:00Well, he ain't no good guy, but, as far as lif...Well, he ain't no good guy, but, as far as life in Alcyone-Land goes, I don't think anyone really knows who that good guy is yet. I think they all think they're the good guy.<br /><br />Maybe I've said too much...<br /><br />Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-43899218463260448992013-01-26T11:42:37.092-08:002013-01-26T11:42:37.092-08:00Introducing the villain?Introducing the villain?Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-38925711758479720002013-01-26T11:32:42.117-08:002013-01-26T11:32:42.117-08:00Very intriguing! Hmmm indeed! I'm excited to g...Very intriguing! Hmmm indeed! I'm excited to get further into this. Matthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01391867546599335769noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-14871762026133769882013-01-26T10:34:03.016-08:002013-01-26T10:34:03.016-08:00Wow, you've packed so much possibility and int...Wow, you've packed so much possibility and intrigue into these sentences, and each sentence is so well written. Wonderful snippet.J.M. Blackmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12452636020480500983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-32292040180184162962013-01-26T08:52:50.146-08:002013-01-26T08:52:50.146-08:00So many hints of what he is thinking and plotting,...So many hints of what he is thinking and plotting, and a strong air of malevolence. I am intrigued to know where this is going, and what the Doctor is planning...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14612014503133683333noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-52245234462949881322013-01-26T07:32:38.579-08:002013-01-26T07:32:38.579-08:00exact copies of each of the girls' Primary Con...exact copies of each of the girls' Primary Control Modules from Scorpii<br /><br />WOW! This opens up an awesome plotline, Cary. But I would expect no less from you.<br /><br />;) HeidiHeidi Ruby Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02190166838730021237noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-75735366904166320252013-01-26T06:18:54.127-08:002013-01-26T06:18:54.127-08:00I totally get that - when you have to keep checkin...I totally get that - when you have to keep checking something really is there in your pocket! Nice :)Chantalhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05569187153786630277noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-15289816818900761992013-01-25T23:34:53.132-08:002013-01-25T23:34:53.132-08:00some great details, like - once more and damp fing...some great details, like - once more and damp fingers - gives us insight into the character - insecure and nervous. I liked the short sentences at the end of the snippet also - showing his mind racing with thoughts. Great snippet! S.A. Checkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04682239850626207822noreply@blogger.com