tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post6242994269477675330..comments2023-09-19T06:23:16.086-07:00Comments on Cary Caffrey: Science-Fiction Fantasy SaturdayCary Caffreyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-38308084081847693832013-04-27T22:16:36.766-07:002013-04-27T22:16:36.766-07:00Your imagery is wonderful. It brings the scene to ...Your imagery is wonderful. It brings the scene to life. I can feel how miserable Sigrid is. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-26404357113352769042013-04-27T19:31:59.319-07:002013-04-27T19:31:59.319-07:00I love your use of description! I can see, hear, a...I love your use of description! I can see, hear, and smell the rain and much and the trucks. <br /><br />I do wonder if anyone watching would see her outline when she was splashed... I mean, she might be invisible, but she's still there...<br /><br />Oh, about Sorne, I haven't decided what to do with the story yet it's a side story to a novel I wrote. I may self-pub the story; I may hold on to it while I see if I can sell the novel to a publisher (or land an agent). But I'm humbled that you want to buy it! I'll certainly let you know when it's available.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-15431112698534293542013-04-27T19:10:27.439-07:002013-04-27T19:10:27.439-07:00Very nice details! Definitely no lack of understan...Very nice details! Definitely no lack of understanding and seeing the scene! Good job!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-91752404593097626692013-04-27T09:15:32.653-07:002013-04-27T09:15:32.653-07:00Even if she has something that keep the rain from ...Even if she has something that keep the rain from comming in the top, she's still subject to splashes from below.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-31856366661316672362013-04-27T08:53:06.092-07:002013-04-27T08:53:06.092-07:00Ack! I hate getting splashed like that.Ack! I hate getting splashed like that.Patrick Stutzmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06701695102224164322noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-27588333887465728512013-04-27T07:03:05.468-07:002013-04-27T07:03:05.468-07:00Ha! That's just for the posters and brochures!...Ha! That's just for the posters and brochures! They forget to mention mosquitoes, death-ray heat, rain...and my favorite - hurricanes!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-73911576351144583482013-04-27T06:02:52.828-07:002013-04-27T06:02:52.828-07:00Brrr! Poor girl. My snippet is in its usual spot. ...Brrr! Poor girl. My snippet is in its usual spot. <a href="http://www.jmfilipowicz.com" rel="nofollow">jmfilipowicz.com</a>Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16155116769885515796noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-49211668487245177282013-04-27T05:50:45.100-07:002013-04-27T05:50:45.100-07:00Made me shiver! Poor kid. Very nice.Made me shiver! Poor kid. Very nice.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-22769698851959771842013-04-27T04:18:33.494-07:002013-04-27T04:18:33.494-07:00Well, even genetically engineered bionic super-bei...Well, even genetically engineered bionic super-beings still have a rough day at the office every once in a while (it's true!).Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-25283887423462452013-04-27T03:59:03.665-07:002013-04-27T03:59:03.665-07:00Made me smile and chuckle...worried about getting ...Made me smile and chuckle...worried about getting crushed, and she ends up soaked instead. :-)T. M. Hunterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04315726033990784930noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-74430739911300350502013-04-27T03:23:37.303-07:002013-04-27T03:23:37.303-07:00Phew! That is GOOD to know. Thank you sir! You are...Phew! That is GOOD to know. Thank you sir! You are far too kind.<br /><br />PS - and what's everyone doing up so early (or am I up late again?)Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-53149079202731072722013-04-27T03:21:09.434-07:002013-04-27T03:21:09.434-07:00But ... I thought all you Bajans only suffered bri...But ... I thought all you Bajans only suffered brilliant warm, sunny days, with soothing trade winds (and tall drinks) to cool you.Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-42348992469483765742013-04-27T03:18:43.509-07:002013-04-27T03:18:43.509-07:00*quickly writes not...* ...anti...SOAKing...techno...*quickly writes not...* ...anti...SOAKing...technol... Check. Got it. Cheers!<br /><br />;)Cary Caffreyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02497153478198948932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-76004818820388285992013-04-26T22:00:27.566-07:002013-04-26T22:00:27.566-07:00I hate it when that happens! Forget the cloaking ...I hate it when that happens! Forget the cloaking technology; what she needs is some sort of anti-soaking tech!Starr O'Harahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02509686040802509537noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-85394944111047525202013-04-26T21:16:16.291-07:002013-04-26T21:16:16.291-07:00Yeh, I've been there in my bus-catching days. ...Yeh, I've been there in my bus-catching days. Splashed and soaked. Very descriptive. Brilliant!!TK Toppinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00192845664117376346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1905558804176895087.post-6943107001439552402013-04-26T20:30:36.690-07:002013-04-26T20:30:36.690-07:00This is an excellent choice of wording. The phrase...This is an excellent choice of wording. The phrases are very descriptive and I could see, feel, experience all of it with crystal clarity in my mind's eye. This is the kind of writing I enjoy reading.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05504298750127152026noreply@blogger.com